Saturday, February 17, 2007

Blowing In The Wind Comments

Rating: 5.0

If a sit still long enough
And focus...really focus
I begin to shrink
In size...until I'm tiny...tiny...tiny...
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Dee Daffodil
COMMENTS
Chris Mendros 01 June 2007

i was waiting for you to reverse the process, and grow bigger, and i guess you did, in your own little way. The proverbial bug on the wall, with good intentions. And you got to play on a popular song title in the process. Love it.

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Jerry Hughes 09 May 2007

...Dee, wonderful Dee, you've done it again, blown our minds

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Lisa Wilkinson 12 April 2007

Bravo Dee, a brilliant well expressed piece of art.

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Stug Jordan 04 April 2007

Wow. Thought this was wonderful. First read I thought it was a 'waiting-to-die' poem but that's FAR too cynical. Levelled, layered and very pretty. S x

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Chuck Audette 01 March 2007

tiny tiny tiny? just a note, if you've become a dust mote, please don't think me any meaner if you end in the vacuum cleaner! nice imaginative write, Dee. -c

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David Harris 28 February 2007

Dee, I loved the flow of this. The beautiful lyrical feel about it. Also the message it conveys. Thanks for sharing it. David

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Alison Cassidy 28 February 2007

Methinks you must be studying meditation - or at least have found your own version of it. Your description perfectly reveals the process of peeling away the layers of illusion and finding the stillness in the very centre of your being - that place of stillness which is perfection. This is a wonderful poem that comes from a very deep place. Simply and lyically written, you will inspire many with your profound and accessible words. love, Allie xxxxxxxxx

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John Tiong Chunghoo 24 February 2007

dee, i love poems like this because i can relate to them. you are good.

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Dee, 'tis a work of art, and a thought-provoking one at that. t x

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Ted Sheridan 22 February 2007

I am in awe of your thought process here, I always wanted to be invisable to the eye.....especially the naked eye.

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jack russell 22 February 2007

Oh that we really could, Dee; experience the true fly on the wall feeling...would be great fun :) Now, if I think really hard.... Best wishes :) jack.

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Howard Johnson 22 February 2007

I would have to agree with duncan, This poem should be on the top 500.It desirves being there, very well crafted, , Dee

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David Taylor 21 February 2007

Dear Dee, may I travel there with thee? Beautiful Poem, Love David

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Original Unknown Girl 21 February 2007

Sounds like the perfect art of escapism to me! ! Great write Dee. HG: -) xx

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Esther Leclerc 20 February 2007

The mystery of nothingness-and-everything all at once... A very fine meditation, Dee. Esther : ]

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Duncan Wyllie 20 February 2007

I would like to see this poem within the top ten, it has all the trademarks of an accomplished and fine writer, THIS IS AWESOME! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Love duncan X

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Ted Sheridan 18 February 2007

Nothing I love better than a warm wind....cold winds make me shrink too. LOL

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Not a member No 4 18 February 2007

It would be lovely if you were right Dee! A very well written poem, with clearly progressive content and interesting ideas. You keep getting better. xx jim

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Diane Violet 17 February 2007

Free again to blow upon the wind, love it Dee.......Hugs, Diane

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R H 17 February 2007

The lyrical musings of a free spirit - beautifully composed Dee. Justine

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