If a sit still long enough
And focus...really focus
I begin to shrink
In size...until I'm tiny...tiny...tiny...
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Wow. Thought this was wonderful. First read I thought it was a 'waiting-to-die' poem but that's FAR too cynical. Levelled, layered and very pretty. S x
tiny tiny tiny? just a note, if you've become a dust mote, please don't think me any meaner if you end in the vacuum cleaner! nice imaginative write, Dee. -c
Dee, I loved the flow of this. The beautiful lyrical feel about it. Also the message it conveys. Thanks for sharing it. David
Methinks you must be studying meditation - or at least have found your own version of it. Your description perfectly reveals the process of peeling away the layers of illusion and finding the stillness in the very centre of your being - that place of stillness which is perfection. This is a wonderful poem that comes from a very deep place. Simply and lyically written, you will inspire many with your profound and accessible words. love, Allie xxxxxxxxx
dee, i love poems like this because i can relate to them. you are good.
Dee, 'tis a work of art, and a thought-provoking one at that. t x
I am in awe of your thought process here, I always wanted to be invisable to the eye.....especially the naked eye.
Oh that we really could, Dee; experience the true fly on the wall feeling...would be great fun :) Now, if I think really hard.... Best wishes :) jack.
I would have to agree with duncan, This poem should be on the top 500.It desirves being there, very well crafted, , Dee
Dear Dee, may I travel there with thee? Beautiful Poem, Love David
Sounds like the perfect art of escapism to me! ! Great write Dee. HG: -) xx
The mystery of nothingness-and-everything all at once... A very fine meditation, Dee. Esther : ]
I would like to see this poem within the top ten, it has all the trademarks of an accomplished and fine writer, THIS IS AWESOME! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Love duncan X
Nothing I love better than a warm wind....cold winds make me shrink too. LOL
It would be lovely if you were right Dee! A very well written poem, with clearly progressive content and interesting ideas. You keep getting better. xx jim
Free again to blow upon the wind, love it Dee.......Hugs, Diane
The lyrical musings of a free spirit - beautifully composed Dee. Justine
i was waiting for you to reverse the process, and grow bigger, and i guess you did, in your own little way. The proverbial bug on the wall, with good intentions. And you got to play on a popular song title in the process. Love it.