Blow me away
Forget yesterday
What happened doesn’t matter
Don’t let my heart shatter!
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I vote 10 a lot and do not mean it-I just want to please the poet. THIS IS NOT THE CASE! I love this poem. It is just sooooo good. I love, mostly, how you are asking the reader to keep your heart safe. You have a way with extended metaphors! 10++++++
this was a very well written piece really enjoyed it!