Blow Little Slow Comments

Once again, due to awkward grammar and many abstractions, I'm not sure what this poem is about. But you seem to be saying that with fame, prestige, and so on, goes public scrutiny and possibility of embarrassment and shame. The point is to remain modest and reserved; that can quell the envy and ire of many people.

Good write..the poem could of flowed more

the two sides of beauty is what many see, but whats inside of you is the reality. a ten

A fine creation! congrats and thanks for sharing!

So far nothing happened to affect my grace Nothing untoward accident I recall or trace

was hardly aware of my red cheeks Comments from people for all weeks

O, .wind, people may laugh at me and blame High velocity speed may bring only shame What to do? Close the eyes or cover the knee

was hardly aware of my red cheeks Comments from people for all weeks I maintained decorum with simple dress code..feeling self elation..lovely piece...10