Thursday, November 3, 2011

Blow A Whistle! Build A Castle! A Dolly Bird Sizzles In My Soul! Comments

Rating: 4.8

A simple gaze at the lips she bears – rounded letter “O” hails!
I just amaze at figure she wears – a grand victory of the letter “V” in styles;
A simple stare at bosom of my lady– red hot – a curved letter “U” howls!
A simple glare at the face of my lady – a new moon – a letter “C” feels;
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Harindhar Reddy
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Queeny Gona 13 October 2013

Lovely read. Diction ran through the poem is amazing!

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Harindhar Reddy 20 May 2020

Hmmm thank you friend...

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 15 July 2012

rhythmic, rejoicing, lovable spirits..............the ink of your thoughts!

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Harindhar Reddy 20 May 2020

Thank you for your amazing review on the poem 🙏🙏👍👍

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 25 February 2012

beautiful love poem with good light emotions)

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Jacqui Broad 24 November 2011

I love this poem! Your love poems are always so playful! It always sounds like fun! You have a nice playground in your mind.

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Harindhar Reddy 20 May 2020

Thank you Jacqueline Broad for your amazing review on the poem 🙏🙏👍👍

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Crimson Love 04 November 2011

Your words have a very light, and playful tone to them, I enjoy it a lot, This poem flows together exceptionally! :)

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Harindhar Reddy 20 May 2020

Thank you for an excellent comment....

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Vipins Puthooran 03 November 2011

It''s a beautiful poem! ! ! ! ''Oh, Love Is Divine! ! ! ! ((I wrote it my heart with a love fruit- don't run away I will die, oh my love Blow a whistle! Build a castle! A lovley rose sizzles in my soul)) What an ethereal lines! ! ! top marks! ! !

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Harindhar Reddy 20 May 2020

Thank you for a beautiful comment on the poem 🙏🙏👍👍

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Dave Walker 03 November 2011

Great poem. Liked it. Good write.

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Harindhar Reddy 20 May 2020

I'm grateful for your amazing review 🙏🙏👍👍

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Harindhar Reddy

Harindhar Reddy

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