Wednesday, April 1, 2009

Blossoms Comments

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Flowers lovely, marvellous gift from God,
They deck the Earth, they give delight,
They drape the dales and adorn the hills,
They feast the eyes and fill the hearts.
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Valsa George
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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 June 2019

Fantastic expression has been made on nature with flowers and its delightness through nice penmanship. i love most lines are....In breeze, I see the flowers dancing in cheer, / And swing their heads in synchronizing motion, / These sights fill me with indescribable joy, / And set my heart racing in glee.. Beautiful poem with nice graphic. Enjoyed.10

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Yes Valsa George, to be a source of delight to others is that we can afford to for the fulfilment of the purpose of ephemeral life, no matter whether its a flower or a poet. Great.Thank you

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Savita Tyagi 27 January 2018

What more is needed t fulfill life than be for many a source of delight. Like flowers this beautiful poem and my dear poetess friend fills us with delight. Thank you Valsa for sharing.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 08 April 2017

My life blooms when plants are abloom, Each morn, I gaze at flowers in myriad hues, That adorn the garden I so carefully keep, My prized possession next to my kids. There is so much of similarity in our love for nature! The flowers, the birds and the lovely trees! They are the true delights of life! A full 100 - my dear friend :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 November 2016

In cheer! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Nosheen Irfan 19 February 2016

What more needed to fulfill a life Than be a source of delight to many! This poem describes the beauty of flowers in the most beautiful way. Outstanding imagery to refresh mind n heal the soul. Flowers bloom n wither. But as long as they live, they fill the air with fragrance n give delight to the beholder. Profound thoughts.10 definitely.

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Akhtar Jawad 29 December 2014

A nice and beautiful description of flowers' beauty...............

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 19 September 2014

Flowers are autographs of angels written everywhere...on plain and hill.....thanks God they gladden human hearts.....Valsa......great write as always..

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Bri Edwards 12 May 2014

Why should a flower wilt and wither so fast...............................ANSWER: so they won't become boring to those around them. but, you make its brief life seem so worthwhile as you say: it delights all, Spreads its fragrance all around, Serves nectar to humming birds and bees, And decks the Earth in brilliant charm. ...................who could ask for anything more? thanks for sharing. bri :)

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Khairul Ahsan 05 April 2014

A beautiful poem this is, as delightful as the blossomed flowers you described in it. 'That adorn the garden my mother keeps, Her prized possession next to her kids., ' - Liked these lines, as this description fits my mother in law who had an ardent knack for gardening. 'What more-needed to fulfill a life, Than be a source of delight to many! ' - All lives are perishable, so are the flowers', but not all can delight the eyes of the others before they wilt and perish, as do the flowers. A good write, well done.

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Walterrean Salley 01 November 2012

Very lovely. Flowers are a blessing; they're so beautiful, seems that they should live forever. But, I guess, just like beautiful people, they [flowers] too must die.

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Constance K Yost 09 September 2012

This is a poem to enjoy. Wonderful work.

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