Friday, November 7, 2014

Blooming Beauty Comments

Rating: 4.8

Love is what we sacrifice
By being good and being nice
It is not barter or bargain
It is grace in shimmering rain
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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan
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Marvin King Reeds 29 January 2022

This is the new piece of the puzzle of the never ending analysis of the word love, and I loved every inch and flow of the poem

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 September 2021

Love is what we sacrifice... that's tue..A beautiful poem... Fascinating! !

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 August 2021

Fantastic imagery and so marvelously written.5 Stars full for this Beauty, dear Colonel

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Dr Antony Theodore 02 January 2018

It is grace in shimmering rain It is what makes us go high It is a point to touch of sky yes love is everything in life.. dear poet...... wish u all the wonders and love and grace in this new year. thank you.. tony

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Elena Sandu 05 March 2017

Beautiful imagery and truthful poem, thank you for share.

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Siddartha Montik 16 January 2017

Very nicely said Sir. Truths as each stamza revealing. thank you. for sharing.! !

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Chinedu Dike 25 December 2014

Indeed, love is sacrifice. It's giving wholeheartedly without expecting anything in return. IT IS NOT BARTER OR BARGAIN. A well articulated poem written with insight to capture the essence of love. A beautiful poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MZANSI AND THE BALLOT BOX.

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Yasmin Khan 20 December 2014

The poem defines love beautifully. It's grace and not a barter or bargain.

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Yasmin Khan 20 December 2014

The poem defines love beautifully. It's grace and not a barter or bargain.

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Alesia Leach 17 November 2014

A lovely poem, wonderfully penned with great flow and rhyme.

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Salini Nair 10 November 2014

It is grace in shimmering rain...........................beautiful love poem sir....enjoyed reading

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 09 November 2014

Another name of love is sacrifice..today Saty Mew Jayte a TV serial hosted by Amir Khan one social Activist Purnima told Power does not bring love but love gives us power..very nice poem :)

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Savita Tyagi 09 November 2014

Lovely poem. Love is beauty blooming in rain! Enjoyed reading it. Thank you for visiting my page and for your kind comment.

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A compelling and creative composition my friend!

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan

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