Bloom Of Youth Comments

Guys it's not that deep she's just saying no till marriage no?

Powerfully penned with good imagery. A pleasure to read...! ! I love to write as well, have my own poetry so please check my site :)

love is blooming there in thy heart like the sunrise flower like the rose and lotus there are you there is me both are in one den of heart for the blooming together for the rising together for the living together maybe our love took birth together in the heaven of soul and still we are here blooming together for our love o dear

That first gentle thrill as your petals unfurl, Like a breeze passing over the skin, Can turn to a tempest and rage uncontrolled To lead you astray from within. beautifully crafted

Sip gently awaiting well-springs. That first gentle thrill as your petals unfurl, Like a breeze passing over the skin, Can turn to a tempest and rage uncontrolled To lead you astray from within............./// beautiful poetic expression; penned beautifully

A beautiful day will definitely come for a little girl. A flower blooms with beauty. Little girl will bloom with nice personality. True love will at last come a-walking and guard her life with greatness. This is an excellent poem beautifully penned...10

Fine craftsmanship and vivid images make this a standout poem for me.

A lovely verse with such profound truth!

A very wise poem with a hauntingly lyrical rhythm. Highest craftsmanship. I bet you're a great Instructor in the Art, judging by the quality of your own verse. Tom

the pearl of truth. and love.

This is so beautiful! I wish I would have heard this as a young girl...all mothers and fathers should share this with their children!

First love with joy! Thanks for sharing.

Such a wonderful poem about falling in love. You capture it perfectly. Stunning write. You've truly talented.

Great poem! Very well written.

WOW! This is my favorite among your poems that I have read this far. This is extremely well-done...and of course, I can relate as as grown woman. Thanks for sharing and for writing this. I see a theme in your writing....

A lovely poem. Well done. Heartiest thanks to you. Be well always.

This poem is so beautiful, it is something in my opinion that every girl growing up should hear. excellent write. Bravo Have a blessed day

A poem with beautiful lines of youth- I like it especially last stanza

a poem with passion and with beautiful lines throughout the whole piece

It's beautiful. I loved it. Writing should always give you feeling. This does. Great job.