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To spread along! To bloom! ! ! With the muse of peace. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Awesome, Life of a dervesh, which is full of mysteries and surprises. Simple for them and complicated for others. I liked it,10++

To recuperate the human kind.......magnificent.....anjandev roy.

The power of fragrance alone can do the nagic.....meaningful...10

Part 2 (For the lighting may be able to guide the traveler away from the injuries that the stone may impart!) Exactly in a similar way, the life of a fragrant flower, however short it might be, is much desirable. For its fragrance and lovely sight might be able to soothe “messed up hearts”... Wonderfully poetic expression. I tend to wonder, how two great poets think alike, Aashan and Aarzoo! ! ! !

In the famous poem “Veena Poovu”, the great Malayalam poet of yesteryears, Kumaran Aasan has sung thus: ...... സദാ നിശി പാന്ഥപാദം ബാധിച്ചു രൂക്ഷശില വാഴ് വതിൽ നിന്നു മേഘ- ജ്യോതിസ്സുതൻ ക്ഷണികജീവിതമല്ലി കാമ്യം? Is the life of a lightning, which lasts for just a fraction of a second, much desirable than the long (may be eternal) life of a hard stone that may injure the feet of a traveler? ((Contd)

Tread on the path of derveshes To recuperate the humankind.... //.... Only a poet with a heart of gold and the beats of a Sufi can perceive such a sublime flower 'Fulfilling the desires' of one and all by its divine fragrance. You are indeed a great poet of nature. Thanks, Aarzoo ji.

A wonderfully crafted composition. Simply splendid....10++❤️❤️❤️

It's so beautiful poem... Thankyou for sharing M'am...