Thursday, June 19, 2014

Bloody Shore Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sitting near the sea, holding a lamp
Waiting for my love with a lonely stamp
She went apart with a lie
Just ignoring the tears in my eye!
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Bohari Mohammad
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Patel Simran 19 June 2014

One of the best poems I've ever heard! Really great job! If 30 out of 10 was possible, that's what I'd give you!

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John Sam 19 June 2014

Excellent poem composed by you The love you have is clearly seen from your poem Thanks for posting

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