Bloody Salsa Comments

i can relate to this poem in many ways... love everyline of it.. a 10 isn't food enough! !

Lovely poem! New ways of seeing old dances: Valse! Oh how I love its simple flow.. ''flesh and steel'' for me would be the tango..Salsa..a fight? ! I never tought of that, maybe you're right, till a pair feel each other as well as to move like one might have a bit of fight..or did you thought of competition, please do set me right.. you open my appetit for dance thank you,10

Evocative poem! nice

Adrian: a very good write, a couple typos but you can correct them. I like the way the younger generation covers each others back. keep up the good work. Your friend Lynn

i LOVED it! ! ! ! the whole thing was just amazing! !

Adrian, it is a VERY GOOD poem. I am impressed! ....although.....the VERY LAST sentence makes me FEEL that ASH-LAY could be ANY BODY....even ME...........an where I've been.........(I) i don't want to go again.........but i and I give it a 10.