Tuesday, April 15, 2014

Bloody Rose Comments

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I found a rose covered in blood,
I wondered how it survived?
I took that rose in my hands
I placed it next to my heart.
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Khairul Ahsan 15 April 2014

You've expressed your sad feelings and poignant thoughts so well in this poem! Well done! 'Wondering and wondering. with pain and fears. Loneliness. Silence. Cries and more tears.' - A good expression.

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