Bloody Mess Comments

That was really deep. I know somewhere this has happened and it's just awful : ( So sad, but great write.

I liked the details you gave in the poem. Very discripted. I wouldn't use the name of the title throught the poem. Just a suggestion.

Quite scary. We all need to work and pray that such as this cease to happen. A good write up.

a terrifying poetic story, though this exist in reality battered wife rising rates today...around the globe...dreadful opus written so well.............10