Monday, July 10, 2017

Bloody Charter Of Rights Comments

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Richard Wlodarski
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Part 3. Most pertinent writing. Congratulations, Richard

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2. The immigrants have usurped the powers of the ethnics, their land, their wealth, everything. In fact looted them. So, they are scared of the ethnic community as such. They deliberately keep the ethic community out of everything.

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Justin Trudeau is no exception. True, he had promised'Sunny days'. But not for the ethnic people. Every nation built by immigrants and ruled by them, have systemically excluded the ethic community from the mainstream. (Contd)

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Valsa George 12 July 2017

Once when raised into authority, people tend to misuse their power. Terrorism and terrorists when becoming the greatest threats to world peace, in no way, a government should entertain or encourage terrorism...! I can sense the intensity of your moral indignation over such acts that can become a serious affront to humanity. Well articulated. A 10

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Richard Wlodarski 12 July 2017

From a prime minister whose motto is: Sunny days ahead! And he has the audacity to defend himself with The Charter of Rights? What about the rights of the victims? What about the rights of Canada's Indigenous? What about the rights of those being illegally held in detention centers? Valsa, I think that you've just inspired me to write a couple more poems. Thanks for all your support! !

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Mj Lemon 11 July 2017

Richard, this is very moving and thought provoking. I can't really identify what it stirs (for me) , but it reminds me of a reaction that some of my American friends had to judicial decisions. This is going back some 20 years at the very least.....People were were upset about the Miranda rights. There was a sense of betrayal, betrayal by the judicial system. There were allegations and suggestions that the justice system was having to free criminals on mere technicalities. What you have me thinking about is- -where is the outrage today? A great work, Richard.

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Richard Wlodarski 12 July 2017

M.J., The Toronto Sun (not a favourite of mine) posted on the front page, a photo of a WWII veteran. His face had been enlarged to fully expose his outrage. On the same picture, in the top right hand corner, a small photo of Khadr. Guess what was the expression on his face? A smirk! The juxtaposition of the two had stirred such great emotion that I was ready to blow up. I couldn't think of a more constructive way to do that than to write this poem. Thank you for your very valuable feedback. As always, I so very much appreciate the insights and positivity! ! !

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Rajnish Manga 10 July 2017

Repetitive words highlight the kind of outrage felt by the patriotic countrymen over the government's bizarre decisions. There should be a proper rationale behind all govt acts. Poet's Notes are quite vociferous about it. Thanks for coming forward with your opinion. Thanks.

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Richard Wlodarski 11 July 2017

Rajnish, you are right on the money with the theme of the repetitive words! The outrage was stewing inside. And I released it via this poem. Thank you for your insightful and positive feedback. And for your continued support and encouragement. Always greatly appreciated! !

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Unwritten Soul 10 July 2017

As i may lack of knowledge of what really happening there, i wont say anything about politics or whatsoever there...I just hope that every Canadians and all people around the world have great things to stay strong, live as we deserved regardless who we are. We just a simple and great life..thats what i wish we all get. I hope all terrorism also can be stopped because i believe it just a group of selfishness people that work for themselves but use ideology as weapon, to weaken us...Long live Justice and love!

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Richard Wlodarski 11 July 2017

In total agreement with you on all counts, Soul! We shall remain strong! And Good will triumph over Evil! ! ! Thank you so much for your support and encouragement! Greatly appreciated! !

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