Bloodmobile Blunder …… [blood: Donating? ; Suspense? ; Humor? ; Mistake; A Little Long] Comments

I'm a big fan of vampire stories and I liked this one. I've sometimes compared the phlebotomist to a vampire, they seem to get that joke all the time. One even had a sign over her work area that said 'Vampire at Work.' And you were very brave in this poem (well almost very brave, the vampire didn't seem scary enough to me.) Calling 911 about a vampire, what would they think. Guess it's good the vampire left before the operator answered.

Mostly the nurse seemed to stay calm, beautifully expressed and highlighted the services. Third word wonderfully expresses meaning more than others. Nice combination of ideas of both wife and husband. All should be respected. Nice poem written with unique style.

i really want to change the third word from the ending, from and to AND, but my wife wants to use HER computer. bri :)