My heart, no longer pumping me with blood
Is silence, forever with no beats
My skin transforming,
Pale white and ice cold
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Now that is a real vampire! You spared no expense in making a bloodthirsty character! Eerie indeed! I loved it! ... Mariana Gasbey....
dark dreary and pungent...yet captures your attention...read iot with rapt attention almost in awe and anticipation lest i make a noise and shoo away the rampaging beast very well written cheers
can somene point out all the figurative language used in this poem plz