Wednesday, July 1, 2009

Bloodlust Transformation {to Vampire} Comments

Rating: 5.0

My heart, no longer pumping me with blood
Is silence, forever with no beats
My skin transforming,
Pale white and ice cold
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Jessica Robert
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aaliyah 22 January 2019

can somene point out all the figurative language used in this poem plz

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Velvet Bloodlust 22 July 2012

Brilliant!           

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Marina Gasbey 27 July 2010

Now that is a real vampire! You spared no expense in making a bloodthirsty character! Eerie indeed! I loved it! ... Mariana Gasbey....

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Saadat Tahir 03 July 2009

dark dreary and pungent...yet captures your attention...read iot with rapt attention almost in awe and anticipation lest i make a noise and shoo away the rampaging beast very well written cheers

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