Tuesday, April 7, 2009

Bloodlust Comments

Rating: 3.5

Run up quickly and I'll slit your f**king throat
I'll make a small gash on your stomach
Then I'll finish by tearing your flesh from the gash to your neck
Break your rib cage and rip out your heart
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Kevin Fisher
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Tyease Collins 05 September 2009

That was really awesome. Even that one cuss word really made a difference in the anger of the person (who im saying is you) who's bathing in the blood. Awesome poem *Ellie*

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very good :) , i like it: D

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Jessica Robert 05 June 2009

Wow, that gave me the chills. Good work though, kinda scray but also good. Cheers. H&K's Jess <33

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Hazel Hale 02 June 2009

a little creepy but stil its all good: -*

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emily corbin 22 April 2009

Really good, I love it.

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Rachel Brewer 17 April 2009

great poem, love the imagery! xx

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Pandora Chaos 07 April 2009

thats an awsome poem kevin

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Maria Keith 07 April 2009

thats kinda gross....lol

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Kevin Fisher

Kevin Fisher

Canton, Ohio
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