Bloodlines Comments

a powerful poem, with bold expressions, we alone have to mend our ways. Ripping my veins at the seams Casting shadows Over my dreams.....beautiful verses in there

Oh Aria... du hast die Wahrheit...

My heritage Ripping my veins at the seams Casting shadows Over my dreams Beautiful expression!

Wow just wow. The feeling this poem left me with resonated through my bones and chilled me at the same time. I can barely describe how much I enjoyed reading this and how well I related to it. But I can tell you my favorite verses: No words to say No way to say To explain To my family, this patriotic nation That I can't keep up the fight It's wrong to leave But staying doesn't feel right And if I'm honest I'm tired already Of watching excuses empty Dominate the lives of plenty

fear not, the mistakes of others, of those you love...cannot overtake the youg woman whom you've become. Hold tight to your passions, your beliefs, and your ability to love...and never let that go. You will do fine Aria Siren. Your words reassure me... Great Ink! ; -) Kelly.

Terrific poem. I know I'm a fan now. 'ripping my veins at the seams' I love that line. (you're very good! !)

We can learn through the mistakes of others - we are each our own master. Very good write, enjoyed reading.