Friday, December 16, 2011

Bloodied Page Of Lies Comments

Rating: 5.0

Blank lines fill with blood,
the words much to red to speak,
have been uttered past broken teeth,
heated past melting,
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Crimson Love
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The co-relation of this poem with its title is exceptionally superb! ! Great poem there worthy for digestion

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*BleedingHeart* *Arielle* 19 December 2011

wow ahmazing very well written i could pictuer it in my head

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Silentpoet Grl 19 December 2011

you write with rich imagery -...its like i can picture the blood pouring on a page spilling the words that cant be said... truly a brilliant write!

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Vipins Puthooran 18 December 2011

My pen bled for! ! ! I think colour of truth is white and black for lie! ! ! ! But a heart sayin' truth in red-colour! ! ! A g'd poem! ! ! 10++

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