Saturday, July 11, 2009

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I Stabbed him once-then did it once more
I pushed him down to the cold floor
I took the blade-into his chest
I took it out with strong detest
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Medusa Waves
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Denise Yong 19 February 2010

Beautiful, elegant and classy; great poem! One of the clearest and most elegant poems I've read. Although you could change the word 'mean' to something else, 'cos it's rather informal and stand out in stark contrast to the rest of the poem, thereby disturbing the nice flow you had built up earlier. (:

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