Tuesday, January 20, 2009

Blood Will Shed Forever Comments

Rating: 4.5

blood sheds on black beds
on mothers hearts
on babies hair
on black finger tips
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elena winters
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Kesav Easwaran 20 April 2009

it appears, in todays life, as if blood is the only substance cheap, available around, to shed profoundly...powerful write, Breeze...here your pen sheds honest-red words...thanks...10

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Eddie Roa 20 January 2009

I see red all over. Wow! what a bloodbath. I guess you couldn't stop saying it enough to bring home your point. Perhaps a bit of restraint can be practicd.

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