Monday, August 22, 2016

Blood Trail Comments

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A trail of blood left in the street
silently screaming for all to hear
yet no one stopped or seemed to care
as if their haste had made them deaf
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Luz H.
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Dr Antony Theodore 18 August 2018

hearing the cry of blood........ such a great imagination......... we are all deaf here on earth to hear such a heartbreaking cry of blood on the street.. let it be of a child or a man or a woman.......... we have to learn to listen to such cries and and help out in such terrible circumstances.......... you are raising the consciousness of the deaf in this world.. thank u for this great poem..dear Luz. tony

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Luz Hanaii 19 August 2018

Tony, thank you for great comment. Yes, it's disturbing to see blood in the street, makes me wonder.

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