Blood Thirsty Until The End Comments

I liked this piece a lot. If I had one reservation it would be that I was looking for the flow, rythym and rhyme of the first two verses to have continued into the last two. But that is personal choice. It still makes for an entertaining piece.

Wow! The passion in this poem is amazing! It gave me chills.

Excellent! You write with such passion and fire. A joy to read. Warmest regards, CJ

you're really cooking, Uriah. Great

Hmmmm....intense straight to the point poem....I like it alot! .

Well! :) I like it, Uriah. It's good....Nothing to pick on...no nits...Just a very good poem!