Blood Test
Nervously I wait in line
heard a shout for me that time?
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THIS TIME the last three lines (actually the first two of them) gave be a loud, hearty laugh! ! ! bri :)
Thank You for this light hearted poem. How brave you were even if passing out.
Test, text! The tides gone out. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
enterS me....... oops, i think. the ending brought me a mild chuckle; thanks. i love to give blood; really! next week i'm up to bat. a fine job describing what i suppose many have experienced. bri :) to MyPoemList.
Nice and amusing poem, I think all sensible people dislike blood tests and being stabbed with needles.