Thursday, June 2, 2016

Blood Test Comments

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Blood Test

Nervously I wait in line
heard a shout for me that time?
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Annette Aitken
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Christopher Tye 21 October 2016

Nice and amusing poem, I think all sensible people dislike blood tests and being stabbed with needles.

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Bri Edwards 06 September 2016

THIS TIME the last three lines (actually the first two of them) gave be a loud, hearty laugh! ! ! bri :)

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Lyn Paul 31 August 2016

Thank You for this light hearted poem. How brave you were even if passing out.

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Edward Kofi Louis 31 July 2016

Test, text! The tides gone out. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bri Edwards 07 June 2016

enterS me....... oops, i think. the ending brought me a mild chuckle; thanks. i love to give blood; really! next week i'm up to bat. a fine job describing what i suppose many have experienced. bri :) to MyPoemList.

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