Sunday, February 8, 2009

Blood Tears Comments

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my tears of blood fall to the earth beneath me
i cant but help to think about the memories you left behind

i fall to my knees beacuse im weak with out you
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Greenwolfe 1962 08 February 2009

Oh what a tragic description this is! I really felt this one. A very good writing. Special! I don't like the line splits very much, but that is a preference. All in all, a good one. GW62

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Randay Darling

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