Tuesday, May 21, 2019

Blood Stains Comments

Rating: 5.0

She shot him in the head.
As he was laying asleep in bed.
She had put up with so much of his physical abuse.
To her his living would serve no good use.
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Lamar Cole
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A vivid depiction of the cruelties in life; brutalities and crime. The final line is thought provoking. Will she be able to conceal the crime? A fascinating poem well crafted.

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