Blood Stained Memories (Chapter 3) Comments

I was disappointer in thid unltimate Chapter.The final fived lines border on cliche.

Highly above mundane...Soaked with vanity fair and weeping nights...Great Work Dear...

'The soldier in myself marched' That's very braved, a lovely job!

'The soldier in myself marched/for the honours I have gained.... ' pointing the way onward to victory, discipline of thought.

are you in the army or something like that? you sound like a true warrior! ! ! ! this is beautiful! ! ! i love it! ! ! !

have to agree with james...your soul speaks your pain..your writing style, I like very much...thanks for sharing...blessings

really good to read your poems............well written

very good...indeed. found it really engrossing...

Nice, out of all 3 I like #2 the best! ! ! Happy writing...

'Blood Stained Memories' - Chapters 1,2, and 3, - are a rich contribution to the 'Love as War' subgenre of Love Poetry. I like the way you called love 'a weapon of mass destruction, ' and I can relate to the Speaker's having separated her heart from her head. These poems are grim; but all too often love is, too.

Love though brings with it misery and pain, should not be allowed to become weakness but instead make it your strength to win the battle of life and come out as a warrior. An inspirational poem. Victory for the poet, no doubt! ! !

You are not just a survivor but the winner of this battle... coz you got over your sorrows; when you've learned to separate your heart from your mindand that's your powerful weapon

All three poems was very very good. I enjoyed reading them.

nicely done.......i like the pattern.

nicely done.......i like the pattern.

really a recovery from a sweet sorrow relation. implanting a new life.. without complaints but have some sweet pain inside..... gud luck for your rest life! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Inspirational indeed, wonderfully written, nice words there....

a self moral victory for you. well done

A poignant end to this collection of poems with an improved flow.

I have read the three poems a few times. I try to interpret, but I may be wrong: Was the loss of a loved one leading to an addiction that you have successfully overwon through reasoning and strength of willpower? If that is the underlying story, it is really a fantastic one. Overwinning such an enemy is really a great victory. If my interpretation is completely wrong, please forgive me. Whatever, it is, enjoy the victory.