Blood Stained Memories (Chapter 2) Comments

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Exceptionally better than Chaoter! ....

Ambitions provoking in this one.Greatly done by over boundary imaginations and milieu...

Highly above mundane...Soaked with vanity fair and weeping nights...Great Work Dear...

Highly above mundane...Soaked with vanity fair and weeping nights...Great Work Dear...

Highly above mundane...Soaked with vanity fair and weeping nights...Great Work Dear...

Highly above mundane...Soaked with vanity fair and weeping nights...Great Work Dear...

this is great writes

i like this poem......very vivid

'Once the rain has washed away/the tracks will be hard to find... ' words of prescience from the thick of battle.

this is getting good! ! ! ! ! =)

Again, very descriptive. (Try, 'Surprise, Surprise' when you have time.

again, I feel your soul in this, and that makes is a good write....but..I can also relate very well...blessings

I like this one better than #1... more rhyming... :)

retaliation and violence dominates the mood of this poem, but in actually sense the poet hope to bring victory and happiness after all her moment of persecution because of love. Good work fellow bard.

...'Your absence penetrates through my soul, Has caused my heart to drown in tears. Retrieve your attack For I have long awaited, To defend and take victory... My love will retaliate. ' nothing to say just very...very...very Awsome poem away from any technical analysis of this poem especially this part it is Romantic a battle that ends up with Romantic I said 'end with romance ' without knowing what's in the Chapter III hahaha...

Another great poem. A good write.

magically made. i love your crowning. you gave love her real place.

really emotional and sweet pain in it.loved it! ! ! !

this poem has a rough tempo compared to the first. have you read my poem; This lovely mess