Blood Stained Memories (Chapter 1) Comments
Love is a battle
That makes us weak
A battle of the heart
That one cannot defeat
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a Wonder of lines like a dose of medicine that conquer our Hearts....Congratulation my Dear Friend...God bless
A great fiery sense of love and its experience whether bitter or sweet....Nice Work
this is beautiful! i love it. love love love, it always makes our countenance to fall.....good write.
this is great poem, its really true and i really enjoy it.
For most people, 'Love is a battle' Indeed this is well done, Theany Ouy!
Perfectly chosen words... Its a good read.... You are right... love is a battle, it makes us weak... Love is a blessing it makes us strong.. Situations defer.. Thank you for sharing :)
'Leaving a wound behind/for the heart to remember...' lines I will take with me from this poem.
i really like this cant wait to read the next chapter! ! ! ! !
i really like this cant wait to read the next chapter! ! ! ! !
its a battlefield indeed. i love the emotion and the flow of words. this is really a nice piece of literary art. thank you.. diane
beautiful work dear, love is really a battle that takes patience and persistent to win, because there are alot of obstacles on the way, i like your figures of speech, especially 'my heart bleeds injuries upon my soul' keep it up.
its a terrible feeling when a person fights for something he believes worth fighting for and gets deserted, betrayed or even failed by the same person whom he/she is fighting for. very sad indeed.
A WONDERFUL DEPICTION OF THE BATTLE FOR LOVE, HEART SAYS SOMETHING MIND REASON SOMETHING BUT ULTIMATLE THE TRUE LOVE WINS ALL THE ODDS. BEAUTIFUL WRTIE.
You are very much welcome dear friends. I would like to thank all of my readers for all your wonderful support and comments. Much appreciated from the heart. Thank you... Theany
wow a write of a deep person....i am so honored to \read this write...thanks for sharing....
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10/22/2025 9:12:06 AM # 1.0.0
I love this chaper, it brings backs memories. You find a way to express feelings as it is and that is so pwerful.