Saturday, December 19, 2009

Blood Stained Hands Comments

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I never knew, never had any idea
Of what it would feel like
To kill another person
To bare onto them, that devastating strike
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Brianna Trombley
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Kimber Harrison 23 December 2009

very very nice man. some parts were just a tad out of rhythm, but that was pretty much it. and i LOVE the part were it says 'To aim to hit, and take another’s life To aim to miss....'and so on. Brilliant stanza! !

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 19 December 2009

wow... wonderful! ......

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