Thursday, January 29, 2009

Blood Spilled For Honor Comments

Rating: 4.5

Blood spilling down my shirt as darkness fills my heart,
My enemy begs for me to forgive his treachery,
I give no mercy but take the blood of foes,
I wish to drink their blood,
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Nicholas Spandrel
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 10 February 2009

seems like a horrible scene of a movie. Good poem anyway. Deserves 10.

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Carissa Mcbride 05 February 2009

this is prettey great. it reminds me of a satanic rap song i love. 10/10 -shadow

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Shawn O'connor 04 February 2009

nice solid poem it points out what really might go on in your head during battle

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Nicholas Spandrel

Nicholas Spandrel

Fort Ord, CA
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