Tuesday, February 13, 2007

Blood So Red Comments

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I sit in a corner, surrounded by mist,
Staring at the blood running down my wrist,
Glancing at the knife, covered in blood so red,
Screaming at god asking why im not dead,
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Sez Farr
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Marvin Brato 20 February 2007

love can go beyond life, it transcends to the unknown where ones love finds infinity.. No matter what one does in loving, it still marks the very essence of life... love is till death do us part! good write... there is love even in sadness and death.10 for you.

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Emily =) 13 February 2007

The sadness flows through every word in this poem, very well written!

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Sez Farr

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