Blood Sky Comments

You are the beat, the steady pulse, and I am just the breeze. that is amazing.... I love this one... great job. Becca

Hi, Vi.... love the last two lines... they seem to apply and focus all the brooding beauty of what goes before! Impressive stuff. Tony

Stunning vivid and powerful very very good thanks

Good question to end with Viola - - and I liked the comparison made with blood - - this is an amazing write - - - 10 from Fay.

Your theme of fire blazed with imagery on my computer screen. A very vivid, passionate and perhaps a ravishing love ending. But that is the question? Excellent work. Karin Anderson

This poem makes me think of sunsets which are always so inspirational, keep your fire burning, the beat of your heart will deliver you unto destiny's day.