Monday, June 7, 2010

Blood Runs Forever Sadly Memories Fade. Comments

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Why do you hurt me my brother my killer.
You make me bleed tears because of all
the fear that you will fade into the fog of my memory.
Its upsetting to lose you but if it comes down
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Eddie Hanaback
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Emily Core 15 June 2010

wow very good that was so meaning full keep it up +10

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Miranda Dodge 07 June 2010

I'll start off first of saying I like the title of your poem. Second, your right, I've had so many pets and human beings die or go away from me or get hurt that I just want them to come back again to the old days. I'm sorry about your brother. Your a really good writer from what I read here. No matter how much they seem to be away from us and how faint our memories are of them. Just remember one thing, they're in our hearts and we'll be with them soon enough! ! Love your poem :)

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Eddie Hanaback

Eddie Hanaback

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