Friday, November 20, 2020

Blood On Your Hands Comments

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Blood on your hands. Dripping.
Is it yours, or your victim's?
Did the knife slip, and
Did you accidentally cut yourself?
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Practicing Poetess
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Richard Wlodarski 02 December 2020

I like your new style. Very clever. Reminds of the TV series HOW TO GET AWAY WITH MURDER. Missed reading you. Great poem!

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Practicing Poetess 05 December 2020

Thanks so much, Richard. It's great to be missed. I'm on and off here, depending upon the demands of " real life." WARNING: Do not watch " How to get away with murder" just before bedtime!

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Ray Hansell 01 December 2020

Changing it up a bit is very good. DNA will get you every time. Provided of course if they know who you are. I liked this.

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Practicing Poetess 05 December 2020

Thanks, Ray. Ah, DNA. They must already have the unsub's DNA on file. Or else, they must catch him first, and try to sneak a sample from him, usually a saliva sample from a cup he drank from, or a cigarette that he smoked.

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Lamar Cole 21 November 2020

This is a great intriguing poem.

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Practicing Poetess 24 November 2020

Thanks so much, Lamar, for your generous comment!

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Deluke Muwanigwa 20 November 2020

If you dont try you will never learn. Thanks for trying. And its good.

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