Blood Of The Innocents. Comments

Great write, Graham... every stanza was better than the previous, each leading to a truely impactful ending. Very powerful and well done! ! Brian

Such a beautiful but cruel world/I am looking out the window it is pouring of rain how many people have to prey for it/ very moving poem, it said it all cheers Sylvie

very moving, really strikes a chord. frank and direct way of putting your message across. a good reminder that this world isn't all chocolate cakes and roses.

The blood soaks into the ground, whether innocent or not. Death meet us all sooner or later, and only the ones left behind have to pay the price.

Hi Graham, I like this. It's sad enough the things we do to each other unwittingly, to add vengeful spite and bitterness to the mix makes untenable situations almost impossible to rectify. This has good flow, and is very heartfelt. Thanks for the read. Ken