Blood Lust Comments

I don't really like this poem. But it is well written. Your just sad because there are 5 stages of deppresion. What ever you should not do is to kill yourself that would mean that your deppresion would win. You can not let that happen. You are young like me but I have to say that you dont want to take your life because if you do I would not be able to read your beautiful poems that you make.

it is ok...no one will know..do it..you will be doing them a favor.....iip.. i liked it..it is good.. :)

my friend. you are one of the best young poets on here.. this is a very well executed piece. with the right emotions set through the perfect rhythm.

The addition of a 2nd person statement through out and at the end of a poem can do one of two things. It either discredits the professionalism of the writing in question or embellishes the theme, making the reader ponder over the piece afterwards. This is a pice so deep dark and outstandingly written, it takes the reader inclusion segments and makes them think past the poem and focus on the elements portrayed, I absolutely find this poem amazing, Beautifully written and conataing a bittersweet taste of the macabre saturninity