Monday, June 25, 2007

Blood Lust Comments

Rating: 4.5

You are the night
that i shall fear to see
when out comes the light
but i forget
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Lorena Walker
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purple moon 26 June 2007

Hello Lorena, I like your vamp poem very much. I see you also have a good line about the eyes. Eyes facinate me on anyone, they really are the window to the soul arn't they, or the window to an inner space where the soul should be! you write this as though you have truly had dealings with the undead! well done x.

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