Thursday, November 1, 2012

Blood In The Snow Comments

Rating: 5.0

Flame-hot blood on ice-cold snow,
Vultures caw and ravens crow.
Broken swords among the slaughter,
Hot blood and cold snow make steam and water.
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Thomas Ware
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Faith Franklin 02 November 2012

wow you are really descriptive, and i like it, some people don't know how to make people see what they are seeing, but you have it down to an art.

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