Tuesday, April 29, 2014

Blood Drowns And We Are Only Dust Comments

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This moral landscape of provincial philosophies
Provides no refuge for heterodox tendencies
So let us sanction group-thought to put in to reason
The axle hearsay of hive mind Recriminations
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Kevin Patrick
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Amitava Sur 20 May 2014

Thank you Kelvin for highlighting such an issue so nicely in your poem..... very nice

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Elena Sandu 06 May 2014

A poem so deep that took me almost an hour to read and not sure yet to fully understand with mind. But I think my soul may have got it, if I am mistaken please forgive me. Indeed. We cannot fight the majority, but we can try to understand and accept the diferences. It may be the only way for a peaceful existence...The dust alone could hardly kill, but our blood, if not controlled could easy take a life. Thank you for share, it felt nice forcing a sleeping mind stand on its feet for a while.

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