Wednesday, July 22, 2009

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Black hearts and burned souls,
Never ending lies.
Murdering, killing, slaughtering others,
Everybody dies.
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Deadly Sacrifice
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Joseph Moore 14 March 2010

I loved the poem, people seem to forget about the trials and tribulations of life, poets such as your self help them remember. 'Death is where it ends, but the end is where it begins.' I especially loved this section, it reminds people that death is not necessarily the end, but a new beginning

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Miss Rainbow 19 February 2010

such a dark poem i like it

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Shagun Khera 23 July 2009

very nice ending... gives u the jist...

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great job..i love the truth and darkness in it 110% No Reason To Care

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