Thursday, January 14, 2010

Blood-Black Death (When The War Is Over) [2010] Comments

Rating: 4.5

Sweltering lands, co’ered with human flesh,
Decaying beneath a rising red sun;
Ravaging all, with wounds that bleed afresh;
Cankering bloody roses, just undone.
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Catherine Beahl
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C. P. Sharma 23 February 2010

The last line says everything beautifully. CP

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C. P. Sharma 23 February 2010

The last line says everything beautifully. CP

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Dulakshi Wakista 14 February 2010

Well expressed.Nice poem.Keep on writing.

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Indira Babbellapati 15 January 2010

chilling details...n an offering of love...

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Shagun Khera 14 January 2010

nice poem..brought to justice by an apt description

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Catherine Beahl

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