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Cagayan de Oro, Philippines
Wednesday, October 29, 2008

Blood And Tears Comments

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drops of crimson fall freely
spotting the floor randomly
trails of blood travel down
from the wound of my heart
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Ianne De Angel 09 December 2008

Amazing poem. I loved it. I really loved the fact of the sadness and darkness here. But I did not enjoy the rhymes... Try to get more. I think the piece are amazing, really deep. But the rhymes are not that good. It's just try to get it more that you will become an amazing poet. Great job. ^^

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May N

May N

Cagayan de Oro, Philippines
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