Sunday, June 15, 2014

Blood And Pain Comments

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One by one,
They fall;
the red clots of my blood...
And all I can do is
...
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Jasbir Chatterjee
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Jasbir Chatterjee 16 November 2014

Thanks for your comment on Blood And Pain.

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Rajnish Manga 16 November 2014

Overt words talking of blood and the accompanying pain but make us see the laserations inflicted by somebody so close to us. Thanks for sharing this poem.

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Ramesh Rai 07 September 2014

Selection of words are absolutely fantastic. It expresses your dynamic will n emotions.

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Amitava Sur 29 July 2014

very heart wrenching one being helplessly undone.

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Geetha Jayakumar 01 July 2014

Beautiful flow of words. Very true said, we can only watch helplessely with pain...Loved it.

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Akhtar Jawad 18 June 2014

An impressive poem, but you did not write the significance of 4-11-1986.

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