One by one,
They fall;
the red clots of my blood...
And all I can do is
...
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Overt words talking of blood and the accompanying pain but make us see the laserations inflicted by somebody so close to us. Thanks for sharing this poem.
Selection of words are absolutely fantastic. It expresses your dynamic will n emotions.
Beautiful flow of words. Very true said, we can only watch helplessely with pain...Loved it.
An impressive poem, but you did not write the significance of 4-11-1986.
Thanks for your comment on Blood And Pain.