Monday, March 5, 2012

Blood And Love Comments

Rating: 4.9

Blood is indispensable to lives
Love is not less
The only difference
In and out in the heart blood flows
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Abdul Wahab
COMMENTS
Michael Williams 19 March 2012

I like this one. Usually the Heart and emotion are simale but here you take it a step further by the mechanical comparison. Good poem.

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Karen Deeks 19 March 2012

Exceptional in it's harmonious and gentle meaning. Thank you Karen

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Danny Draper 18 March 2012

A fine succinct poem, great play on language with a sad but truly evocative and romantic ending.

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Malaya Roses 13 March 2012

Mesmerizing smoothness in this poem and how it relates to our life... Excellent poem! !

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Daniel Warner 12 March 2012

short, but never doubt how a poem could make readers rethink on how they see love.

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Pheko Motaung 07 March 2012

Thank you for this lucid masterpiece of a great poem!

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Lusekelo Simwela 07 March 2012

blood and love...kinda lyk the heart hold tha love and dispenses it around with every heartbeat...nice writting

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Harindhar Reddy 07 March 2012

Mojo! People I heard short is sweet and now i feel your short poem is sweet. It's lucid poem with some food to thought.... A tremendous effort by the poet! Cheers, Keep writing and Keep sharing!

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David Gerardino 07 March 2012

i like it, and i dont, , , needs a little work.....

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Ajay Seshadri 07 March 2012

This poem is very nice. You have brought out the thought of how love is needed to sustain the flow of blood very well. Keep writing.

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Saadat Tahir 06 March 2012

love is not less.....indeed. nice lines...very nice lil poem. :) cheers

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Fabiyas M V 06 March 2012

Beautifully penned, Wahab.Simple but thought provoking..........Keep write on.With love, FABIYAS

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Bharat Mehru 06 March 2012

good poem, keep going, good luck.

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Poet Of The River 05 March 2012

true. very true. short and sweet.

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 05 March 2012

nice writing... really true words

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