Thursday, September 18, 2008

Blood Comments

Rating: 5.0

blood is a liquid that floods the inside of your body.
trying to get rid of some of this liquid called blood
finding ways like cutting and using needles.
trying to keep from drowning from the inside.....can't breath....
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Anne Ornelas
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I can really relate. It's sad but I still really like your poem.

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Wandering Scarlet 07 April 2010

VVVV tim says emoooo! sorry... Life can be overwhelming, as Sartre would say, that we are thrown upon life without choice. Nobody ever chose to live, but some choose to die

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TR0UBL3 IM B@Q 24 November 2008

hi uyea this is a reall good poem lot of feelingin this one

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Heather S 18 November 2008

this poem is very deep

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Ian Singer 18 September 2008

i like your poem it was a good emo poem

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