A sharp knife stabbed on my back
It was put by my closest person
No, the person was not my enemy
I don't know why I got such a treason
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Betrayal is a funny thing I suppose. It never comes from an enemy or foe. So true Miss Grace. Betrayal seems to always come from within. From those you trusted and loved! ! Loved this poem. Thank you for sharing! !
3. "Blood… flowing out of my body Such a pretty color I must say".. loved this. Even when the narrator was facing absolute death, he/she is inclined to make bashful comment! Loved this presentation
2) A very emotional poem. Good rhyme scheme. Top score. All the best.
‘A stab in the back' might be figurative. So could be the blood flowing. But the wound is real, when the ‘back-stab' comes from someone ‘closest'
Makes me think of Hebrews 9: 22.