Wednesday, June 11, 2008

Blood Comments

Rating: 5.0

What is blood?
It's the thing you write with,
the stuff we spill not caring whose it is,
only that we need our fill of it like a tick needs it to live.
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Linda Brooks
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Ben Gieske 30 October 2008

You successfully bring out the disgust I also feel about all the blood spilt by humans.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 18 September 2008

well composed................10

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