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This poem is kinda funny, and captures your attention. I really love it.

Very thought provoking. I found it not to be confusing at all. I feel that in your poem you were saying there's is a pace were all bad things stop, but because of the state the world is in that place is blocked. Bravo, this will be one of my favorites.

I find this poem slightly confusing free faller, maybe it was the other comment that did it, but what you describe in your poem does not sound like a heavenly place to me. Interesting thought provoker poem though. 9 from Tai

Good. Sort of like a little piece of heaven.