A blissful melody
Tingle within me
Spreading from my essence
To the least of me
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My dearest niro.... this is one of my favourites. i am so proud to have you as my best friend...... as always..... you made me happy...... that is the best gift one can give to the other.........10 from me....
The flow in this poem is beautiful...images just fly off the page at me...thank you...Fi
Joy emanates from this verse - - a celebration of music - beautifully worded.... another 10 from me and thank you........ from Fay.
I love each line, really melodious. It dares me to sing the well crafted lines. Well penned.