Friday, January 16, 2009

Blissful Melody Comments

Rating: 2.7

A blissful melody
Tingle within me
Spreading from my essence
To the least of me
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Deva De Silva
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Noel Horlanda 16 September 2009

I love each line, really melodious. It dares me to sing the well crafted lines. Well penned.

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Dishani Jayaweera 28 January 2009

My dearest niro.... this is one of my favourites. i am so proud to have you as my best friend...... as always..... you made me happy...... that is the best gift one can give to the other.........10 from me....

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Fred Babbin 27 January 2009

You express your feelings well.

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Rachel Flint 21 January 2009

there is a sense of grace to thjs poem lovely!

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Fiona Davidson 17 January 2009

The flow in this poem is beautiful...images just fly off the page at me...thank you...Fi

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Fay Slimm 16 January 2009

Joy emanates from this verse - - a celebration of music - beautifully worded.... another 10 from me and thank you........ from Fay.

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