It was a beautiful evening
When Sun was setting down
I was on the riverside
And I moved away off my town.
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It's a beautiful poem. The title is attractive too. Solitude is a bliss that not everyone enjoys. Those who do, they seek solitude, not always though. The second and the third stanzas of your poem have a similar tone like that of Rabindra NathTagore's 'Golden Boat' (Sonar Toree) .
Your poem is very beautiful, but one thing I must tell you. Solitude is attractive for a day two, if it is prolonging... The Solitude of Alexander Selkirk I AM monarch of all I survey; My right there is none to dispute; From the centre all round to the sea I am lord of the fowl and the brute O Solitude! where are the charms 5 That sages have seen in thy face? Better dwell in the midst of alarms, Than reign in this horrible place. W. Cowper