Thursday, March 27, 2014

Bliss Of Solitude Comments

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It was a beautiful evening 
When Sun was setting down 
I was on the riverside 
And I moved away off my town. 
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Ruma Chaudhuri
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Akhtar Jawad 01 May 2014

Your poem is very beautiful, but one thing I must tell you. Solitude is attractive for a day two, if it is prolonging... The Solitude of Alexander Selkirk I AM monarch of all I survey; My right there is none to dispute; From the centre all round to the sea I am lord of the fowl and the brute O Solitude! where are the charms 5 That sages have seen in thy face? Better dwell in the midst of alarms, Than reign in this horrible place. W. Cowper

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Khairul Ahsan 29 April 2014

It's a beautiful poem. The title is attractive too. Solitude is a bliss that not everyone enjoys. Those who do, they seek solitude, not always though. The second and the third stanzas of your poem have a similar tone like that of Rabindra NathTagore's 'Golden Boat' (Sonar Toree) .

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Ruma Chaudhuri

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